These are test shots, so the background is just a low resolution representation, the tuba is missing the ring around the lip, the connector ring is not beveled, the shadows are a bit low resolution, and there are a few details on the tuba that are missing to speed up render time.
I didn't realize that the goose would need to be going the other direction for this shot to swipe right until after I rendered the first test shot, so I reversed the text. I mirror a lot to compensate for the side the tuba is on, so I think it will pass.
It's kind of hard to see, but there is a flying V of text that says "Regular Goose"
1. To preserve the line of action and the swipe direction, I should use text following the goose to go left and text on the background to go right...
2. Pick a more readable font for graffiti and a flatter surface for reflection text...
Stuff to build on or a way someone might use my research???
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