Some Thoughts about the middle...
The 2nd movie would probably more effectively build an affection if it showed the goose enduring injustice. Maybe the off screen action from the 1st with the goose trying to get the food, getting confused, getting ripped off, or something of that nature.
I was thinking about making an illustration that suggests the subtext of each chapter.A couple titles I am kicking around:
Geese are Terrible With Directions
Geese and Instruction
When you Give a Goose a List
Encoding, Storage, and Retrieval
maybe an approach more like A. A. Milne
...Of Geese and Lists
Matters of Geese and Finance
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