In order to get the audience to experience loss when Tuba-goose gives up, they need to grow an attachment for him...
Ordeal builds attachment with admiration
Heroes on a mythical journey overcome an ordeal.
Ideas for application:
Should the story begin with Tuba-Goose as a normal goose, and his journey is into the human world?
Should I try to build attachment through another ordeal.
His ordeal the struggle to fit in (gain respect?). He attains a piece, realizes will never be real, and abandons it. This should be an acceptance of defeat, not a victory.
Gilgamesh breaks the rules:
http://genrehacks.blogspot.com/2013/11/real-myths-are-weird.html
Gilgamesh breaks the rules:
http://genrehacks.blogspot.com/2013/11/real-myths-are-weird.html
Witnessing injustice builds empathy for the victim
Ideas for application:
Maybe if the audience sees Tuba-Goose enduring poor treatment...
Examples:
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Brother%27s_Keeper_(1992_film)
https://www.pinterest.com/pin/6966574395030477/
The Incredibles DVD mentioned a character who was supposed to die, but he was cut because it wold take too much time to get the audience to feel an attachment for him.
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