Motion Capture vs Motion Poem

The Motion Capture for the words in the street shot did not turn out as well as I hoped. Especially when you put it next to a motion poem like this:

I kind of envy the flow and camera freedom.

I was thinking something that was closer to the goose's feet might speed up the tempo. I think there is some sort of mental POV shot (Barsam 100) like this that is used to transition from one environment to another, but I cannot find a reference.